Guilt and/or redemption. Sporting moment. Individual redemption of a previous in-contentment. Duration of a single race, with out specifically saying this… using indicative language to prompt the reader into knowing time is passing. Opening: Personification & listing. (attributes of the environment that I am in Paragraph 1: Sense Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3:   Adrenaline pumping, […]

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